Quality Blog Comment

We have the power to make people feel great with our positive comments, so we need to make sure we don’t upset the blogger with a negative comment. We used the programme Make Beliefs Comix to make a comic strip about a quality blog comment. It was fun but a little bit challenging to make the comic strip. Have a read of our comic strips. Do they make you feel proud?

Persuasive Writing

kia ora over the past few weeks in class we have been leaning about persuasive writing below is my persuasive writing i hope you enjoy reading it.

My persuasive Argument

Did you know that kids day goes for 3 hours? Hi my name is Riley I'm going to be telling you why we should have a longer kids day. 

I think we should have a longer kids day because we get to have lots of fun games and get to eat a lot of sweets. I also want to have a longer kids day because we could have an even longer treasure hunt. Their are a load of different activities you can do during kids day that can be for preschoolers, young children, older children and families. 

I also think having a longer kids day would be a good idea because we do a lot of physical activities where we have to run, jump and race each other which is healthy for us. If we had a longer kids day we could do more exercise and spend more time with our friends and family. Some of the activities on kids day are face painting, a dance competition, mount everest climb and a haunted house. 

These reasons show why we should have a longer kids day. Please try to make kids' days longer.


By Riley